Friday, April 5, 2013

Girl prettier than Spring

You let down your hair over your right shoulder.
You walked by me often but never could I get bolder!
The Spring outside? Naah! Your gorgeous dress!
Your magnetic smile made me forget my stress.
Fresh, flowing, floral dress! Oh and your ringing voice...
Man! You have charmed how many boys?
Mustard in my salad! I thank it, because you see...
because it brought your smile to me.
I hope this poem impresses you!
I'd love to see you with me at a dinner table, too!

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

;)

JUST FOR YOU said...

Nice Poem sir. Don't go for so much rhyme scheme let the word speak. Really impressive!

Unknown said...

Did you ask her to dinner?

Varun T said...

Hi Denise, yes I asked her out through this poem. She said she had a boyfriend so I converted it to a lunch. She loves classic style literature and poetry - as it turned out.